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 GitLab [Reference Architectures](../../administration/reference_architectures/index.md) give qualified and tested guidance on the recommended ways GitLab can be configured to meet the performance requirements of various workloads. Reference Architectures are purpose-designed to be non-implementation specific so they can be extrapolated to as many environments as possible. This generally means they have a highly-granular "machine" to "server role" specification and focus on system elements that impact performance. This is what enables Reference Architectures to be adaptable to the broadest number of supported implementations.
 
-Implementation patterns are built on the foundational information and testing done for Reference Architectures and allow architects and implementers at GitLab, GitLab Customers, and GitLab Partners to build out deployments with less experimentation and a higher degree of confidence that the results will perform as expected. A more thorough discussion of implementation patterns is below in [Additional details on implementation patterns](#additional-details-on-implementation-patterns).
+Implementation patterns are built on the foundational information and testing done for Reference Architectures and allow architects and implementers at GitLab, GitLab Customers, and GitLab Partners to build out deployments with less experimentation and a higher degree of confidence that the results perform as expected. A more thorough discussion of implementation patterns is below in [Additional details on implementation patterns](#additional-details-on-implementation-patterns).
 
 ## AWS Implementation patterns information
 
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ The following are the currently available implementation patterns for GitLab whe
 
 ### GitLab Site Reliability Engineering (SRE) for AWS
 
-[GitLab Site Reliability Engineering (SRE) for AWS](gitlab_sre_for_aws.md) - information for planning, implementing, upgrading and long term management of GitLab instances and runners on AWS.
+[GitLab Site Reliability Engineering (SRE) for AWS](gitlab_sre_for_aws.md) - information for planning, implementing, upgrading, and long term management of GitLab instances and runners on AWS.
 
 ### Patterns to Install GitLab Cloud Native Hybrid on AWS EKS (HA)
 
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ The following are the currently available implementation patterns for GitLab whe
 
 [EKS Cluster Provisioning Patterns](eks_clusters_aws.md) - considerations for setting up EKS cluster for runners and for integrating.
 
-### Patterns for Scaling HA GitLab Runner on AWS EC2 ASG
+### Patterns for Scaling HA GitLab Runner on AWS EC2 Auto Scaling group (ASG)
 
 The following repository is self-contained in regard to enabling this pattern: [GitLab HA Scaling Runner Vending Machine for AWS EC2 ASG](https://gitlab.com/guided-explorations/aws/gitlab-runner-autoscaling-aws-asg/). The [feature list for this implementation pattern](https://gitlab.com/guided-explorations/aws/gitlab-runner-autoscaling-aws-asg/-/blob/main/FEATURES.md) is good to review to understand the complete value it can deliver.
 
@@ -47,23 +47,23 @@ The following repository is self-contained in regard to enabling this pattern: [
 
 ## AWS known issues list
 
-Known issues are gathered from within GitLab and from customer reported issues. Customers successfully implement GitLab with a variety of "as a Service" components that GitLab has not specifically been designed for, nor has ongoing testing for. While GitLab does take partner technologies very seriously, the highlighting of known issues here is a convenience for implementers and it does not imply that GitLab has targeted compatibility with, nor carries any type of guarantee of running on the partner technology where the issues occur. Please consult individual issues to understand GitLabs stance and plans on any given known issue.
+Known issues are gathered from within GitLab and from customer reported issues. Customers successfully implement GitLab with a variety of "as a Service" components that GitLab has not specifically been designed for, nor has ongoing testing for. While GitLab does take partner technologies very seriously, the highlighting of known issues here is a convenience for implementers and it does not imply that GitLab has targeted compatibility with, nor carries any type of guarantee of running on the partner technology where the issues occur. Consult individual issues to understand the GitLab stance and plans on any given known issue.
 
 See the [GitLab AWS known issues list](https://gitlab.com/gitlab-com/alliances/aws/public-tracker/-/issues?label_name%5B%5D=AWS+Known+Issue) for a complete list.
 
 ## Official GitLab releases as AMIs
 
-GitLab produces AMI images during the regular release process. The AMIs can be used for single instance GitLab installation or, by configuring `/etc/gitlab/gitlab.rb`, can be specialized for specific GitLab service roles (for example a Gitaly server). Older releases remain available and can be used to migrate an older GitLab server to AWS.
+GitLab produces Amazon Machine Images (AMI) during the regular release process. The AMIs can be used for single instance GitLab installation or, by configuring `/etc/gitlab/gitlab.rb`, can be specialized for specific GitLab service roles (for example a Gitaly server). Older releases remain available and can be used to migrate an older GitLab server to AWS.
 
 Currently the Amazon AMI uses the Amazon prepared Ubuntu AMI (x86 and ARM are available) as its starting point.
 
 NOTE:
-When deploying a GitLab instance using the official AMI, the root password to the instance will be the EC2 **Instance** ID (NOT the AMI ID). This way of setting the root account password is specific to official GitLab published AMIs ONLY.
+When deploying a GitLab instance using the official AMI, the root password to the instance is the EC2 **Instance** ID (not the AMI ID). This way of setting the root account password is specific to official GitLab published AMIs ONLY.
 
-Instances running on Community Edition (CE) require a migration to Enterprise Edition (EE) in order to subscribe to the GitLab Premium or Ultimate plan. If you want to pursue a subscription, using the Free-forever plan of Enterprise Edition is the least disruptive method.
+Instances running on Community Edition (CE) require a migration to Enterprise Edition (EE) to subscribe to the GitLab Premium or Ultimate plan. If you want to pursue a subscription, using the Free-forever plan of Enterprise Edition is the least disruptive method.
 
 NOTE:
-Since any given GitLab upgrade might involve data disk updates or database schema upgrades, simply swapping out the AMI is not sufficient for taking upgrades.
+Because any given GitLab upgrade might involve data disk updates or database schema upgrades, swapping out the AMI is not sufficient for taking upgrades.
 
 1. Log in to the AWS Web Console, so that clicking the links in the following step take you directly to the AMI list.
 1. Pick the edition you want:
@@ -72,9 +72,9 @@ Since any given GitLab upgrade might involve data disk updates or database schem
    - [GitLab Community Edition](https://console.aws.amazon.com/ec2/v2/home?region=us-east-1#Images:visibility=public-images;ownerAlias=782774275127;search=GitLab%20CE;sort=desc:name): The open source version of GitLab.
    - [GitLab Premium or Ultimate Marketplace (Prelicensed)](https://console.aws.amazon.com/ec2/v2/home?region=us-east-1#Images:visibility=public-images;source=Marketplace;search=GitLab%20EE;sort=desc:name): 5 user license built into per-minute billing.
 
-1. AMI IDs are unique per region, so once you've loaded one of the above, select the desired target region in the upper right of the console to see the appropriate AMIs.
+1. AMI IDs are unique per region, so after you've loaded one of the above, select the desired target region in the upper right of the console to see the appropriate AMIs.
 1. After the console is loaded, you can add additional search criteria to narrow further. For instance, type `13.` to find only 13.x versions.
-1. To launch an EC2 Machine with one of the listed AMIs, check the box at the start of the relevant row, and select the "Launch" button near the top of left of the page.
+1. To launch an EC2 Machine with one of the listed AMIs, check the box at the start of the relevant row, and select **Launch** near the top of left of the page.
 
 NOTE:
 If you are trying to restore from an older version of GitLab while moving to AWS, find the
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ GitLab implementation patterns build upon [GitLab Reference Architectures](../..
 
 Testing-backed architectural qualification is a fundamental concept behind implementation patterns:
 
-- Implementation patterns maintain GitLab Reference Architecture compliance and provide [GitLab Performance Tool](https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/quality/performance) (gpt) reports to demonstrate adherence to them.
+- Implementation patterns maintain GitLab Reference Architecture compliance and provide [GitLab Performance Tool](https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/quality/performance) (GPT) reports to demonstrate adherence to them.
 - Implementation patterns may be qualified by and/or contributed to by the technology vendor. For instance, an implementation pattern for AWS may be officially reviewed by AWS.
 - Implementation patterns may specify and test Cloud Platform PaaS services for suitability for GitLab. This testing can be coordinated and help qualify these technologies for Reference Architectures. For instance, qualifying compatibility with and availability of runtime versions of top level PaaS such as those for PostgreSQL and Redis.
 - Implementation patterns can provided qualified testing for platform limitations, for example, ensuring Gitaly Cluster can work correctly on specific Cloud Platform availability zone latency and throughput characteristics or qualifying what levels of available platform partner local disk performance is workable for Gitaly server to operate with integrity.