Minor terminology updates

5 files changed, 32 insertions, 25 deletions

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
index b132850..f74d94d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
@@ -25,9 +25,10 @@
   src="gs-goa1.svg" width="100%" />
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Press the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
-    <item><p>From the list of panels, select <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> on the
+    right side of the top bar.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click the settings button at the bottom left of the menu.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Select the <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> panel.</p></item>
   </steps>
   
   <media its:translate="yes" type="image" mime="image/svg"
@@ -49,8 +50,4 @@
      Time Settings</gui>, and then close the panel.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
-  <!-- FIXME: 
-	- explain what time/date does - a reference in further reading?
-  -->
-
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page
index c1b34c4..b2953ad 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page
@@ -55,9 +55,10 @@
     <title>Change the wallpaper</title>
     
     <steps>
-      <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar and press
-      the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
-      <item><p>From the list of panels, select <gui>Background</gui>.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Click the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> on the
+      right side of the top bar.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Click the settings button at the bottom left of the menu.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Click the <gui>Background</gui> panel.</p></item>
       <item><p>Click the current background image on the left side of the
       <gui>Background</gui> window.</p></item>
       <item><p>Click the background image you want to use.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
index ceec75f..a010b1a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
@@ -25,16 +25,17 @@
     src="gs-goa1.svg" width="100%" />
 
     <steps>
-      <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Press the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Click the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> on the
+      right side of the top bar.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Click the settings button at the bottom left of the menu.</p></item>
     </steps>
        
     <media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg"
     src="gs-goa2.svg" width="100%" />
     
     <steps style="continues">
-      <item><p>From the list of panels, select <gui>Online Accounts</gui>, then
-      click on the <gui>Add an online account</gui> button.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Click the <gui>Online Accounts</gui> panel, then
+      click the <gui>Add an online account</gui> button.</p></item>
     </steps>
     
     <note><p>If you have set up an online account before, you can add another
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page
index e47a1f0..8d0f2dc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-get-online.page
@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@
 
     <steps>
       <item><p>The network connection icon on the right-hand side of the top
-       bar shows that you are off-line.</p>
-      <p>The off-line status can be caused by a number of reasons: for
+       bar shows that you are offline.</p>
+      <p>The offline status can be caused by a number of reasons: for
        example, a network cable has been unplugged, the computer has been set
        to run in <em>airplane mode</em>, or there are no available Wi-Fi
        networks in your area.</p>
@@ -58,9 +58,18 @@
     src="gs-go-online2.svg" width="100%" />
     
     <steps>
-    <item><p>To connect to a Wi-Fi (wireless) network, click the status menu at
-     the top right of the screen, and then click <gui>Select Network</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
+      <title>To connect to a Wi-Fi (wireless) network:</title>
+      <item>
+        <p>Click the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> on the right
+        side of the top bar.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi Not Connected</gui>. The Wi-Fi section of the menu
+        will expand.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <p>Click <gui>Select Network</gui>.</p>
+      </item>
     </steps>
 
      <note style="important">
@@ -78,8 +87,6 @@
      credentials.</p></item>
     </steps>
 
-    <!-- FIXME: links to existing wireless/broadband connection documents. -->
-
   </section>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
index 3bdd151..d1cb5e7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
@@ -77,12 +77,13 @@
         </p>
       </note>
 
-      <p>To customize what is displayed in the search results:</p>
 
       <steps>
-        <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar and press
-         the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
-        <item><p>From the list of panels, select <gui>Search</gui>.</p></item>
+        <title>To customize what is displayed in the search results:</title>
+        <item><p>Click the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> on the
+        right side of the top bar.</p></item>
+        <item><p>Click the settings button at the bottom left of the menu.</p></item>
+        <item><p>Click the <gui>Search</gui> panel.</p></item>
         <item><p>In the list of search locations, click the <gui>ON/OFF</gui>
          switch next to the search location you want to enable or disable.</p>
          </item>