release notes text tweaks [ci skip]lcg/use-inline-resources-core

1 files changed, 4 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/RELEASE_NOTES.md b/RELEASE_NOTES.md
index 168edc3822..c6e3c40db2 100644
--- a/RELEASE_NOTES.md
+++ b/RELEASE_NOTES.md
@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@ class MyProvider < Chef::Provider::LWRPBase
 end
 ```
 
-Start in 12.5 the `use_inline_resources` directive was mixed into Chef::Provider directly and had the
-side effect of mixin in the DSL.  After 12.5 it would have worked to write code like this:
+Starting in 12.5 the `use_inline_resources` directive was mixed into Chef::Provider directly and had the
+side effect of mixing in the DSL.  After 12.5 it would have worked to write code like this:
 
 ```ruby
 class MyProvider < Chef::Provider
@@ -28,9 +28,8 @@ end
 ```
 
 But that code would be broken (with a hard syntax error on `use_inline_resources` on prior versions of
-chef-client).  After 12.9 that code will now be broken on the use of the Recipe DSL which has been removed
-from Chef::Provider when mixing use_inline_resources into classes that only inherit from the core
+chef-client).  After 12.9 that code will now be broken again on the use of the Recipe DSL which has been removed
+from Chef::Provider when mixing `use_inline_resources` into classes that only inherit from the core
 class.  If any code has been written like this, it should be modified to correctly inherit from
 Chef::Provider::LWRPBase instead (which will have the side effect of fixing it so that it correctly works
 on Chef 11.0-12.5 as well).
-