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| author | Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu> | 2013-06-27 21:51:44 +0200 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-07-02 23:06:22 -0400 |
| commit | e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 (patch) | |
| tree | 8c40d1a1e527a09974839ac44a3b7b3d19232758 /man/loginctl.xml | |
| parent | 6824690f140f45064157d220a24b9afbeb1d093f (diff) | |
| download | systemd-e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76.tar.gz | |
man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages
Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.
To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.
[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
Diffstat (limited to 'man/loginctl.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/loginctl.xml | 30 |
1 files changed, 15 insertions, 15 deletions
diff --git a/man/loginctl.xml b/man/loginctl.xml index e76ee95902..f10ca030c9 100644 --- a/man/loginctl.xml +++ b/man/loginctl.xml @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ <option>all</option> to select whether to kill only the leader process of the session or all processes of the - session. If omitted defaults to + session. If omitted, defaults to <option>all</option>.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -157,8 +157,8 @@ <command>kill-user</command>, choose which signal to send to selected processes. Must be one of the well - known signal specifiers such as - SIGTERM, SIGINT or SIGSTOP. If omitted + known signal specifiers, such as + SIGTERM, SIGINT or SIGSTOP. If omitted, defaults to <option>SIGTERM</option>.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -308,10 +308,10 @@ <listitem><para>Show properties of one or more users or the manager - itself. If no argument is specified + itself. If no argument is specified, properties of the manager will be - shown. If a user is specified - properties of the user is shown. By + shown. If a user is specified, + properties of the user are shown. By default, empty properties are suppressed. Use <option>--all</option> to show those too. To select specific @@ -332,9 +332,9 @@ <listitem><para>Enable/disable user lingering for one or more users. If - enabled for a specific user a user + enabled for a specific user, a user manager is spawned for him/her at - boot, and kept around after + boot and kept around after logouts. This allows users who aren't logged in to run long-running services.</para></listitem> @@ -386,14 +386,14 @@ <listitem><para>Show properties of one or more seats or the manager - itself. If no argument is specified + itself. If no argument is specified, properties of the manager will be - shown. If a seat is specified + shown. If a seat is specified, properties of the seat are shown. By default, empty properties are suppressed. Use <option>--all</option> to show those too. To select specific - properties to show use + properties to show, use <option>--property=</option>. This command is intended to be used whenever computer-parsable output is @@ -411,13 +411,13 @@ one or more devices to a seat. The devices should be specified via device paths in the <filename>/sys</filename> - file system. To create a new seat + file system. To create a new seat, attach at least one graphics card to a previously unused seat name. Seat names may consist only of a-z, A-Z, 0-9, "-" and "_" and must be prefixed with "seat". To drop assignment of a - device to a specific seat just + device to a specific seat, just reassign it to a different seat, or use <command>flush-devices</command>.</para></listitem> @@ -429,8 +429,8 @@ <listitem><para>Removes all device assignments previously created with <command>attach</command>. After this - call only automatically generated - seats will remain and all seat + call, only automatically generated + seats will remain, and all seat hardware is assigned to them.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> |