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authorJason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu>2013-06-27 21:51:44 +0200
committerZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>2013-07-02 23:06:22 -0400
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man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages
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diff --git a/man/sd-id128.xml b/man/sd-id128.xml
index c194f57458..02fb76b56d 100644
--- a/man/sd-id128.xml
+++ b/man/sd-id128.xml
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
<refname>SD_ID128_FORMAT_STR</refname>
<refname>SD_ID128_FORMAT_VAL</refname>
<refname>sd_id128_equal</refname>
- <refpurpose>APIs for processing 128 bit IDs</refpurpose>
+ <refpurpose>APIs for processing 128-bit IDs</refpurpose>
</refnamediv>
<refsynopsisdiv>
@@ -68,12 +68,12 @@
<title>Description</title>
<para><filename>sd-id128.h</filename> provides APIs to
- process and generate 128 bit ID values. The 128 bit ID
+ process and generate 128-bit ID values. The 128-bit ID
values processed and generated by these APIs are a
generalization of OSF UUIDs as defined by <ulink
url="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4122">RFC
- 4122</ulink>, though use a simpler string
- formatting. These functions impose no structure on the
+ 4122</ulink> but use a simpler string
+ format. These functions impose no structure on the
used IDs, much unlike OSF UUIDs or Microsoft GUIDs,
but are fully compatible with those types of IDs.
</para>
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
for more information about the implemented
functions.</para>
- <para>A 128 bit ID is implemented as the following
+ <para>A 128-bit ID is implemented as the following
union type:</para>
<programlisting>typedef union sd_id128 {
@@ -93,26 +93,26 @@
uint64_t qwords[2];
} sd_id128_t;</programlisting>
- <para>This union type allows accessing the 128 bit ID
- as 16 separate bytes or two 64 bit words. It is generally
- safer to access the ID components by their 8 bit array
+ <para>This union type allows accessing the 128-bit ID
+ as 16 separate bytes or two 64-bit words. It is generally
+ safer to access the ID components by their 8-bit array
to avoid endianness issues. This union is intended to
be passed call-by-value (as opposed to
call-by-reference) and may be directly manipulated by
clients.</para>
<para>A couple of macros are defined to denote and
- decode 128 bit IDs:</para>
+ decode 128-bit IDs:</para>
<para><function>SD_ID128_MAKE()</function> may be used
- to denote a constant 128 bit ID in source code. A
- commonly used idiom is to assign a name to a 128 bit
+ to denote a constant 128-bit ID in source code. A
+ commonly used idiom is to assign a name to a 128-bit
ID using this macro:</para>
<programlisting>#define SD_MESSAGE_COREDUMP SD_ID128_MAKE(fc,2e,22,bc,6e,e6,47,b6,b9,07,29,ab,34,a2,50,b1)</programlisting>
<para><function>SD_ID128_CONST_STR()</function> may be
- used to convert constant 128bit IDs into constant
+ used to convert constant 128-bit IDs into constant
strings for output. The following example code will
output the string
"fc2e22bc6ee647b6b90729ab34a250b1":</para>
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@
<para><function>SD_ID128_FORMAT_STR</function> and
<function>SD_ID128_FORMAT_VAL()</function> may be used
- to format a 128 bit ID in a
+ to format a 128-bit ID in a
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>printf</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>
format string, as shown in the following
example:</para>
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
return 0;
}</programlisting>
- <para>Use <function>sd_id128_equal()</function> to compare two 128 bit IDs:</para>
+ <para>Use <function>sd_id128_equal()</function> to compare two 128-bit IDs:</para>
<programlisting>int main(int argc, char *argv[]) {
sd_id128_t a, b, c;