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author | Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu> | 2013-06-27 21:51:44 +0200 |
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committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-07-02 23:06:22 -0400 |
commit | e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 (patch) | |
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man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages
Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.
To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.
[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
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diff --git a/man/sd-id128.xml b/man/sd-id128.xml index c194f57458..02fb76b56d 100644 --- a/man/sd-id128.xml +++ b/man/sd-id128.xml @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ <refname>SD_ID128_FORMAT_STR</refname> <refname>SD_ID128_FORMAT_VAL</refname> <refname>sd_id128_equal</refname> - <refpurpose>APIs for processing 128 bit IDs</refpurpose> + <refpurpose>APIs for processing 128-bit IDs</refpurpose> </refnamediv> <refsynopsisdiv> @@ -68,12 +68,12 @@ <title>Description</title> <para><filename>sd-id128.h</filename> provides APIs to - process and generate 128 bit ID values. The 128 bit ID + process and generate 128-bit ID values. The 128-bit ID values processed and generated by these APIs are a generalization of OSF UUIDs as defined by <ulink url="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4122">RFC - 4122</ulink>, though use a simpler string - formatting. These functions impose no structure on the + 4122</ulink> but use a simpler string + format. These functions impose no structure on the used IDs, much unlike OSF UUIDs or Microsoft GUIDs, but are fully compatible with those types of IDs. </para> @@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ for more information about the implemented functions.</para> - <para>A 128 bit ID is implemented as the following + <para>A 128-bit ID is implemented as the following union type:</para> <programlisting>typedef union sd_id128 { @@ -93,26 +93,26 @@ uint64_t qwords[2]; } sd_id128_t;</programlisting> - <para>This union type allows accessing the 128 bit ID - as 16 separate bytes or two 64 bit words. It is generally - safer to access the ID components by their 8 bit array + <para>This union type allows accessing the 128-bit ID + as 16 separate bytes or two 64-bit words. It is generally + safer to access the ID components by their 8-bit array to avoid endianness issues. This union is intended to be passed call-by-value (as opposed to call-by-reference) and may be directly manipulated by clients.</para> <para>A couple of macros are defined to denote and - decode 128 bit IDs:</para> + decode 128-bit IDs:</para> <para><function>SD_ID128_MAKE()</function> may be used - to denote a constant 128 bit ID in source code. A - commonly used idiom is to assign a name to a 128 bit + to denote a constant 128-bit ID in source code. A + commonly used idiom is to assign a name to a 128-bit ID using this macro:</para> <programlisting>#define SD_MESSAGE_COREDUMP SD_ID128_MAKE(fc,2e,22,bc,6e,e6,47,b6,b9,07,29,ab,34,a2,50,b1)</programlisting> <para><function>SD_ID128_CONST_STR()</function> may be - used to convert constant 128bit IDs into constant + used to convert constant 128-bit IDs into constant strings for output. The following example code will output the string "fc2e22bc6ee647b6b90729ab34a250b1":</para> @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ <para><function>SD_ID128_FORMAT_STR</function> and <function>SD_ID128_FORMAT_VAL()</function> may be used - to format a 128 bit ID in a + to format a 128-bit ID in a <citerefentry><refentrytitle>printf</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry> format string, as shown in the following example:</para> @@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ return 0; }</programlisting> - <para>Use <function>sd_id128_equal()</function> to compare two 128 bit IDs:</para> + <para>Use <function>sd_id128_equal()</function> to compare two 128-bit IDs:</para> <programlisting>int main(int argc, char *argv[]) { sd_id128_t a, b, c; |