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author | Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu> | 2013-06-27 21:51:44 +0200 |
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committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-07-02 23:06:22 -0400 |
commit | e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 (patch) | |
tree | 8c40d1a1e527a09974839ac44a3b7b3d19232758 /man/systemd.time.xml | |
parent | 6824690f140f45064157d220a24b9afbeb1d093f (diff) | |
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man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages
Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.
To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.
[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
Diffstat (limited to 'man/systemd.time.xml')
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1 files changed, 31 insertions, 31 deletions
diff --git a/man/systemd.time.xml b/man/systemd.time.xml index a9318bb787..79ebdc5dfc 100644 --- a/man/systemd.time.xml +++ b/man/systemd.time.xml @@ -50,16 +50,16 @@ <refsect1> <title>Description</title> - <para>In systemd timestamps, timespans, and calendar + <para>In systemd, timestamps, time spans, and calendar events are displayed and may be specified in closely related syntaxes.</para> </refsect1> <refsect1> - <title>Displaying Timespans</title> + <title>Displaying Time Spans</title> - <para>Timespans refer to time durations. On display - systemd will present timespans as a space separated + <para>Time spans refer to time durations. On display, + systemd will present time spans as a space-separated series of time values each suffixed by a time unit.</para> @@ -70,10 +70,10 @@ </refsect1> <refsect1> - <title>Parsing Timespans</title> + <title>Parsing Time Spans</title> - <para>When parsing systemd will accept the same - timespan syntax. Separating spaces may be omitted. The + <para>When parsing, systemd will accept the same + time span syntax. Separating spaces may be omitted. The following time units are understood:</para> <itemizedlist> @@ -92,9 +92,9 @@ are assumed, but some exceptions exist and are marked as such. In a few cases <literal>ns</literal>, <literal>nsec</literal> is accepted too, where the - granularity of the timespan allows for this.</para> + granularity of the time span allows for this.</para> - <para>Examples for valid timespan specifications:</para> + <para>Examples for valid time span specifications:</para> <programlisting>2 h 2hours @@ -108,12 +108,12 @@ <title>Displaying Timestamps</title> <para>Timestamps refer to specific, unique points in - time. On display systemd will format these in the + time. On display, systemd will format these in the local timezone as follows:</para> <programlisting>Fri 2012-11-23 23:02:15 CET</programlisting> - <para>The week day is printed according to the locale + <para>The weekday is printed according to the locale choice of the user.</para> </refsect1> @@ -123,10 +123,10 @@ <para>When parsing systemd will accept a similar timestamp syntax, but excluding any timezone specification (this limitation might be removed - eventually). The week day specification is optional, - but when the week day is specified it must either be + eventually). The weekday specification is optional, + but when the weekday is specified it must either be in the abbreviated (<literal>Wed</literal>) or - non-abbreviated (<literal>Wednesday</literal>) english + non-abbreviated (<literal>Wednesday</literal>) English language form (case doesn't matter), and is not subject to the locale choice of the user. Either the date, or the time part may be omitted, in which case @@ -136,11 +136,11 @@ specified in full or may be abbreviated (omitting the century).</para> - <para>A timestamp is considered invalid if a week day + <para>A timestamp is considered invalid if a weekday is specified and the date does not actually match the specified day of the week.</para> - <para>When parsing systemd will also accept a few + <para>When parsing, systemd will also accept a few special placeholders instead of timestamps: <literal>now</literal> may be used to refer to the current time (or of the invocation of the command @@ -150,14 +150,14 @@ current day, the day before or the next day, respectively.</para> - <para>When parsing systemd will also accept relative - time specifications. A timespan (see above) that is + <para>When parsing, systemd will also accept relative + time specifications. A time span (see above) that is prefixed with <literal>+</literal> is evaluated to the current time plus the specified - timespan. Correspondingly a timespan that is prefix + time span. Correspondingly, a time span that is prefixed with <literal>-</literal> is evaluated to the current - time minus the specified timespan. Instead of - prefixing the timespan with <literal>-</literal> it + time minus the specified time span. Instead of + prefixing the time span with <literal>-</literal> it may also be suffixed with a space and the word <literal>ago</literal>.</para> @@ -182,10 +182,10 @@ <para>Note that timestamps printed by systemd will not be parsed correctly by systemd, as the timezone specification is not accepted, and printing timestamps - is subject to locale settings for the week day while - parsing only accepts english week day names.</para> + is subject to locale settings for the weekday while + parsing only accepts English weekday names.</para> - <para>In some cases systemd will display a relative + <para>In some cases, systemd will display a relative timestamp (relative to the current time, or the time of invocation of the command) instead or in addition to an absolute timestamp as described above. A @@ -208,17 +208,17 @@ <para>The above refers to 11:12:13 of the first or fifth day of any month of the year 2012, given that it - is a thursday or friday.</para> + is a Thursday or Friday.</para> <para>The weekday specification is optional. If - specified it should consist of one or more english - language week day names, either in the abbreviated + specified, it should consist of one or more English + language weekday names, either in the abbreviated (Wed) or non-abbreviated (Wednesday) form (case does - not matter), separated by commas. Specifying two week - days separated by "-" refers to a range of continuous - week days. "," and "-" may be combined freely.</para> + not matter), separated by commas. Specifying two weekdays + separated by "-" refers to a range of continuous + weekdays. "," and "-" may be combined freely.</para> - <para>In the date and time specifications any + <para>In the date and time specifications, any component may be specified as "*" in which case any value will match. Alternatively, each component can be specified as list of values separated by |