SERVER-64372 Clean up some wording in comments and logs

3 files changed, 4 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/src/mongo/db/s/resharding/resharding_metrics_helpers.cpp b/src/mongo/db/s/resharding/resharding_metrics_helpers.cpp
index a056596d2e7..cd6ca6d32c2 100644
--- a/src/mongo/db/s/resharding/resharding_metrics_helpers.cpp
+++ b/src/mongo/db/s/resharding/resharding_metrics_helpers.cpp
@@ -81,9 +81,8 @@ void onCriticalSectionError(OperationContext* opCtx, const StaleConfigInfo& info
         onCriticalSectionErrorThrows(opCtx, info);
     } catch (const DBException& e) {
         LOGV2(6437201,
-              "Exception while recording resharding metrics after an operation failure due to the "
-              "critical section being held",
-              "Status"_attr = redact(e.toStatus()));
+              "Unable to record resharding critical section metrics for the current operation",
+              "reason"_attr = redact(e.toStatus()));
     }
 }
 
diff --git a/src/mongo/db/s/sharding_data_transform_instance_metrics_test.cpp b/src/mongo/db/s/sharding_data_transform_instance_metrics_test.cpp
index 0ffa17ea88e..68b3379a3be 100644
--- a/src/mongo/db/s/sharding_data_transform_instance_metrics_test.cpp
+++ b/src/mongo/db/s/sharding_data_transform_instance_metrics_test.cpp
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ TEST_F(ShardingDataTransformInstanceMetricsTest, DonorIncrementWritesDuringCriti
 TEST_F(ShardingDataTransformInstanceMetricsTest, CurrentOpReportsCriticalSectionTime) {
     const auto roles = {Role::kDonor, Role::kCoordinator};
     for (const auto& role : roles) {
-        LOGV2(6437200, "CurrentOpReportsCriticalSectionTime", "Role"_attr = role);
+        LOGV2(6437200, "CurrentOpReportsCriticalSectionTime", "role"_attr = role);
         constexpr auto kFiveSeconds = Milliseconds(5000);
         auto uuid = UUID::gen();
         const auto& clock = getClockSource();
diff --git a/src/mongo/s/stale_exception.h b/src/mongo/s/stale_exception.h
index 52b440760e5..3372efd20b2 100644
--- a/src/mongo/s/stale_exception.h
+++ b/src/mongo/s/stale_exception.h
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ protected:
     boost::optional<ChunkVersion> _wanted;
     ShardId _shardId;
 
-    // This fields below are not serialized and therefore do not get propagated to the router
+    // The following fields are not serialized and therefore do not get propagated to the router.
     boost::optional<SharedSemiFuture<void>> _criticalSectionSignal;
     boost::optional<OperationType> _duringOperationType;
 };