doc: correct punctuation and improve typography in documentation

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/NEWS b/NEWS
index 1b7dc2183d..87da6e18cc 100644
--- a/NEWS
+++ b/NEWS
@@ -1156,7 +1156,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 218:
           another unit listed in its Also= setting might be.
 
         * Similar to the various existing ConditionXYZ= settings for
-          units there are now matching AssertXYZ= settings. While
+          units, there are now matching AssertXYZ= settings. While
           failing conditions cause a unit to be skipped, but its job
           to succeed, failing assertions declared like this will cause
           a unit start operation and its job to fail.
@@ -1164,7 +1164,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 218:
         * hostnamed now knows a new chassis type "embedded".
 
         * systemctl gained a new "edit" command. When used on a unit
-          file this allows extending unit files with .d/ drop-in
+          file, this allows extending unit files with .d/ drop-in
           configuration snippets or editing the full file (after
           copying it from /usr/lib to /etc). This will invoke the
           user's editor (as configured with $EDITOR), and reload the
@@ -1188,7 +1188,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 218:
           inhibitors.
 
         * Scope and service units gained a new "Delegate" boolean
-          property, which when set allows processes running inside the
+          property, which, when set, allows processes running inside the
           unit to further partition resources. This is primarily
           useful for systemd user instances as well as container
           managers.
@@ -1198,7 +1198,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 218:
           audit fields are split up and fully indexed. This means that
           journalctl in many ways is now a (nicer!) alternative to
           ausearch, the traditional audit client. Note that this
-          implements only a minimal audit client, if you want the
+          implements only a minimal audit client. If you want the
           special audit modes like reboot-on-log-overflow, please use
           the traditional auditd instead, which can be used in
           parallel to journald.
@@ -1262,9 +1262,9 @@ CHANGES WITH 218:
           will spew out warnings if the compilation fails. This
           requires libxkbcommon to be installed.
 
-        * When a coredump is collected a larger number of metadata
+        * When a coredump is collected, a larger number of metadata
           fields is now collected and included in the journal records
-          created for it. More specifically control group membership,
+          created for it. More specifically, control group membership,
           environment variables, memory maps, working directory,
           chroot directory, /proc/$PID/status, and a list of open file
           descriptors is now stored in the log entry.
@@ -1934,8 +1934,8 @@ CHANGES WITH 215:
           open_by_handle_at() is now prohibited for containers,
           closing a hole similar to a recently discussed vulnerability
           in docker regarding access to files on file hierarchies the
-          container should normally not have access to. Note that for
-          nspawn we generally make no security claims anyway (and
+          container should normally not have access to. Note that, for
+          nspawn, we generally make no security claims anyway (and
           this is explicitly documented in the man page), so this is
           just a fix for one of the most obvious problems.
 
@@ -4274,8 +4274,8 @@ CHANGES WITH 197:
           devices as seat masters, i.e. as devices that are required
           to be existing before a seat is considered preset. Instead,
           it will now look for all devices that are tagged as
-          "seat-master" in udev. By default framebuffer devices will
-          be marked as such, but depending on local systems other
+          "seat-master" in udev. By default, framebuffer devices will
+          be marked as such, but depending on local systems, other
           devices might be marked as well. This may be used to
           integrate graphics cards using closed source drivers (such
           as NVidia ones) more nicely into logind. Note however, that
@@ -5315,7 +5315,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 44:
 
         * Reorder configuration file lookup order. /etc now always
           overrides /run in order to allow the administrator to always
-          and unconditionally override vendor supplied or
+          and unconditionally override vendor-supplied or
           automatically generated data.
 
         * The various user visible bits of the journal now have man