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| author | Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu> | 2013-06-27 21:51:44 +0200 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-07-02 23:06:22 -0400 |
| commit | e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 (patch) | |
| tree | 8c40d1a1e527a09974839ac44a3b7b3d19232758 /man/hostnamectl.xml | |
| parent | 6824690f140f45064157d220a24b9afbeb1d093f (diff) | |
| download | systemd-e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76.tar.gz | |
man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages
Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.
To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.
[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
Diffstat (limited to 'man/hostnamectl.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/hostnamectl.xml | 48 |
1 files changed, 24 insertions, 24 deletions
diff --git a/man/hostnamectl.xml b/man/hostnamectl.xml index 801ab3a7bf..d7a9e92879 100644 --- a/man/hostnamectl.xml +++ b/man/hostnamectl.xml @@ -60,9 +60,9 @@ query and change the system hostname and related settings.</para> - <para>This tool distinguishes three different host - names: the high-level "pretty" hostname which might - include all kinds of special characters + <para>This tool distinguishes three different + hostnames: the high-level "pretty" hostname which + might include all kinds of special characters (e.g. "Lennart's Laptop"), the static hostname which is used to initialize the kernel hostname at boot (e.g. "lennarts-laptop"), and the transient hostname @@ -77,10 +77,10 @@ and transient hostnames are limited to the usually accepted characters of internet domain names.</para> - <para>The static host name is stored in + <para>The static hostname is stored in <filename>/etc/hostname</filename>, see <citerefentry><refentrytitle>hostname</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry> - for more information. The pretty host name, chassis + for more information. The pretty hostname, chassis type and icon name are stored in <filename>/etc/machine-info</filename>, see <citerefentry><refentrytitle>machine-id</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para> @@ -143,8 +143,8 @@ <listitem><para>If <command>set-hostname</command> is invoked and one or more of these - options are passed only the selected - hostnames is + options are passed, only the selected + hostname(s) is/are updated.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> </variablelist> @@ -164,34 +164,34 @@ <term><command>set-hostname [NAME]</command></term> <listitem><para>Set the system - hostname. By default this will alter + hostname. By default, this will alter the pretty, the static, and the - transient hostname alike, however if + transient hostname alike; however, if one or more of <option>--static</option>, <option>--transient</option>, - <option>--pretty</option> are used + <option>--pretty</option> are used, only the selected hostnames are changed. If the pretty hostname is being set, and static or transient are - being set as well the specified host - name will be simplified in regards to - the character set used before the + being set as well, the specified + hostname will be simplified in regards + to the character set used before the latter are updated. This is done by - replacing spaces by "-" and removing + replacing spaces with "-" and removing special characters. This ensures that - the pretty and the static hostname - are always closely related while still + the pretty and the static hostname are + always closely related while still following the validity rules of the specific name. This simplification of the hostname string is not done if - only the transient and/or static host - names are set, and the pretty host - name is left untouched. Pass the empty - string "" as hostname to reset the - selected hostnames to their default - (usually - "localhost").</para></listitem> + only the transient and/or static + hostnames are set, and the pretty + hostname is left untouched. Pass the + empty string "" as the hostname to + reset the selected hostnames to their + default (usually "localhost"). + </para></listitem> </varlistentry> <varlistentry> @@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ Naming Specification</ulink>. Pass an empty string to this operation to reset the icon name to the default - value which is determined from chassis + value, which is determined from chassis type (see below) and possibly other parameters.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> |