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authorZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>2023-01-11 16:45:59 +0100
committerZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>2023-01-11 17:12:54 +0100
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man: fix issues reported by the manpage-l10n project
Fixes #25780. > Man page: crypttab.5 > Issue 1: Missing fullstop > Issue 2: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<size=> → B<cipher=>, B<hash=>, B<size=> > > "Force LUKS mode\\&. When this mode is used, the following options are " > "ignored since they are provided by the LUKS header on the device: " > "I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<size=>" Seems OK to me. The full stop is there and has been for at least a few years. And we use <option> for the markup, which is appropriate here. > Man page: crypttab.5 > Issue 1: Missing fullstop > Issue 2: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<keyfile-offset=>, I<keyfile-size=>, I<size=> → B<cipher=>, B<hash=>, B<keyfile-offset=>, B<keyfile-size=>, B<size=> > > "Use TrueCrypt encryption mode\\&. When this mode is used, the following " > "options are ignored since they are provided by the TrueCrypt header on the " > "device or do not apply: I<cipher=>, I<hash=>, I<keyfile-offset=>, I<keyfile-" > "size=>, I<size=>" Same. > Man page: journalctl.1 > Issue 1: make be → may be Fixed. > Issue 2: below\\&. → below: Fixed. > Man page: journalctl.1 > Issue: Colon at the end? > > "The following commands are understood\\&. If none is specified the default " > "is to display journal records\\&." > msgstr "" > "Die folgenden Befehle werden verstanden\\&. Falls keiner festgelegt ist, ist " > "die Anzeige von Journal-Datensätzen die Vorgabe\\&." This is a bit awkward, but I'm not sure how to fix it. > Man page: kernel-install.8 > Issue: methods a fallback → methods fallback It was correct, but I added a comma to make the sense clearer. > Man page: loader.conf.5 > Issue 1: secure boot variables → Secure Boot variables > Issue 2: one → one for (multiple times) > > "Supported secure boot variables are one database for authorized images, one " > "key exchange key (KEK) and one platform key (PK)\\&. For more information, " > "refer to the \\m[blue]B<UEFI specification>\\m[]\\&\\s-2\\u[2]\\d\\s+2, " > "under Secure Boot and Driver Signing\\&. Another resource that describe the " > "interplay of the different variables is the \\m[blue]B<EDK2 " > "documentation>\\m[]\\&\\s-2\\u[3]\\d\\s+2\\&." "one of" would sound strange. "One this and one that" is OK. > Man page: loader.conf.5 > Issue: systemd-boot → B<systemd-boot>(7) Fixed. > Man page: logind.conf.5 > Issue: systemd-logind → B<systemd-logind>(8) We use <filename>systemd-logind</> on subsequent references… I think that's good enough. > Man page: nss-myhostname.8 > Issue: B<getent> → B<getent>(1) Fixed. > Man page: nss-resolve.8 > Issue: B<systemd-resolved> → B<systemd-resolved>(8) The first reference does this, subsequent are shorter. > Man page: os-release.5 > Issue: Portable Services → Portable Services Documentation? Updated. > Man page: pam_systemd_home.8 > Issue: auth and account use "reason", while session and password do not? Reworded. > Man page: portablectl.1 > Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation Updated. > Man page: repart.d.5 > Issue: The partition → the partition Fixed. > Man page: repart.d.5 > Issue: B<systemd-repart> → B<systemd-repart>(8) The first reference does this. I also change this one, because it's pretty far down in the text. > Man page: systemd.1 > Issue: kernel command line twice? > > "Takes a boolean argument\\&. If false disables importing credentials from " > "the kernel command line, qemu_fw_cfg subsystem or the kernel command line\\&." Apparently this was fixed already. > Man page: systemd-boot.7 > Issue: enrollement → enrollment Fixed. > Man page: systemd-cryptenroll.1 > Issue: multiple cases: any specified → the specified Reworded. > Man page: systemd-cryptenroll.1 > Issue: If this this → If this Fixed tree-wide. > Man page: systemd-cryptsetup-generator.8 > Issue: and the initrd → and in the initrd "Is honoured by the initrd" is OK, because we often speak about the initrd as a single unit. But in the same paragraph we also used "in the initrd", which makes the other use look sloppy. I changed it to "in the initrd" everywhere in that file. > Man page: systemd.directives.7 > Issue: Why are these two quoted (but not others)? > > "B<\\*(Aqh\\*(Aq>" > > B<\\*(Aqs\\*(Aq>" > > "B<\\*(Aqy\\*(Aq>" This is autogenerated from files… We use slightly different markup in different files, and it's just too hard to make it consistent. We gave up on this. > Man page: systemd.exec.5 > Issue 1: B<at>(1p) → B<at>(1) > Issue 2: B<crontab>(1p) → B<crontab>(1) Fixed. > Man page: systemd.exec.5 > Issue: B<select()> → B<select>(2) Fixed. > Man page: systemd.exec.5 > Issue: qemu → B<qemu>(1) The man page doesn't seem to be in any of the canonical places on the web. I added a link to online docs. > Man page: systemd.exec.5 > Issue: variable → variables Seems to be fixed already. > Man page: systemd-integritysetup-generator.8 > Issue: systemd-integritysetup-generator → B<systemd-integritysetup-generator> I changed <filename> to <command>. > Man page: systemd-integritysetup-generator.8 > Issue: superfluous comma at the end Already fixed. > Man page: systemd-measure.1 > Issue: (see B<--pcr-bank=>) below → (see B<--pcr-bank=> below) Reworded. > Man page: systemd-measure.1 > Issue: =PATH> → =>I<PATH> Fixed. > Man page: systemd-measure.1.po > Issue: B<--bank=DIGEST> → B<--bank=>I<DIGEST> Fixed. > Man page: systemd.netdev.5 > Issue: os the → on the Appears to have been fixed already. > Man page: systemd.netdev.5 > Issue: Onboard → On-board (as in previous string) Updated. > Man page: systemd.network.5 > Issue: B<systemd-networkd> -> B<systemd-networkd>(8) First reference does this, subsequent do not. > Man page: systemd.network.5 > Issue: B<netlabelctl> → B<netlabelctl>(8) First reference does this, subsequent do not. > Man page: systemd.network.5 > Issue: Missing verb (aquired? configured?) in the half sentence starting with "or by a " I dropped the comma. > Man page: systemd-nspawn.1 > Issue: All host users outside of that range → All other host users Reworded. > # FIXME no effect → no effect\\&. > #. type: Plain text > #: archlinux debian-unstable fedora-rawhide mageia-cauldron opensuse-tumbleweed > msgid "" > "Whichever ID mapping option is used, the same mapping will be used for users " > "and groups IDs\\&. If B<rootidmap> is used, the group owning the bind " > "mounted directory will have no effect" A period is added. Not sure if there's some other issue. > Man page: systemd-oomd.service.8 > Issue: B<systemd> → B<systemd>(1) Done. > Man page: systemd.path.5 > Issue 1: B<systemd.exec>(1) → B<systemd.exec>(5) > Issue 2: This section does not (yet?) exist Fixed. > Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8 > Issue 1: indicate phases into TPM2 PCR 11 ?? > Issue 2: Colon at the end of the paragraph? Fixed. > Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8 > Issue: final boot phase → final shutdown phase? Updated. > Man page: systemd-pcrphase.service.8 > Issue: for the the → for the Fixed tree-wide. > Man page: systemd-portabled.service.8 > Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation Updated. > Man page: systemd-pstore.service.8 > Issue: Here and the following paragraphs: . → \\&. // Upstream: What does this comment mean? // You normally write \\&. for a full dot (full stop etc.); here you write only "." (i.e. a plain dot). > > "and we look up \"localhost\", nss-dns will send the following queries to " > "systemd-resolved listening on 127.0.0.53:53: first \"localhost.foobar.com\", " > "then \"localhost.barbar.com\", and finally \"localhost\". If (hopefully) the " > "first two queries fail, systemd-resolved will synthesize an answer for the " > "third query." Looks all OK to me. > Man page: systemd.resource-control.5 > Issue: Missing closing bracket after link to Control Groups version 1 Fixed. > Man page: systemd-sysext.8 > Issue: In systemd-portabled.service(8): Portable Services Documentation Updated. > Man page: systemd.timer.5 > Issue 1: B<systemd.exec>(1) → B<systemd.exec>(5) > Issue 2: This section does not (yet?) exist Fixed. > Man page: systemd.unit.5 > Issue: that is → that are Fixed. > Man page: systemd-veritysetup-generator.8 > Issue: systemd-veritysetup-generator → B<systemd-veritysetup-generator> > > "systemd-veritysetup-generator implements B<systemd.generator>(7)\\&." > > "systemd-veritysetup-generator understands the following kernel command line " > "parameters:" Updated. > Man page: systemd-volatile-root.service.8 > Issue: initrdyes → Initrd Fixed. > Man page: sysupdate.d.5 > Issue: : → \\&. (As above in TRANSFER) Updated. > Man page: sysupdate.d.5 > Issue: some → certain Updated. > Man page: sysupdate.d.5 > Issue 1: i\\&.e\\& → I\\&.e\\& Fixed. > Issue 2: the image → the system "image" seems correct. > Man page: tmpfiles.d.5 > Issue: systemd-tmpfiles → B<systemd-tmpfiles>(8) Updated.
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diff --git a/man/systemd-pcrphase.service.xml b/man/systemd-pcrphase.service.xml
index 9b7cc80b3a..ea1e541fb7 100644
--- a/man/systemd-pcrphase.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-pcrphase.service.xml
@@ -41,11 +41,11 @@
<para>These services require
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-stub</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry> to be
- used in a unified kernel image (UKI) setup. They execute no operation when invoked when the stub has not
- been used to invoke the kernel. The stub will measure the invoked kernel and associated vendor resources
- into PCR 11 before handing control to it; once userspace is invoked these services then will extend
- certain literal strings indicating various phases of the boot process into TPM2 PCR 11. During a regular
- boot process the following strings are extended into PCR 11.</para>
+ used in a unified kernel image (UKI). They execute no operation when the stub has not been used to invoke
+ the kernel. The stub will measure the invoked kernel and associated vendor resources into PCR 11 before
+ handing control to it; once userspace is invoked these services then will extend certain literal strings
+ indicating various phases of the boot process into TPM2 PCR 11. During a regular boot process the
+ following strings are extended into PCR 11:</para>
<orderedlist>
<listitem><para><literal>enter-initrd</literal> is extended into PCR 11 early when the initrd
@@ -78,9 +78,8 @@
<listitem><para><literal>final</literal> is extended into PCR 11 at the end of system shutdown. It is
supposed to act as barrier between the time the service manager still runs and when it transitions into
- the final boot phase where service management is not available anymore. (This string is extended at
+ the final shutdown phase where service management is not available anymore. (This string is extended at
stop of <filename>systemd-pcrphase-sysinit.service</filename>.)</para></listitem>
-
</orderedlist>
<para>During a regular system lifecycle, the strings <literal>enter-initrd</literal> →
@@ -91,7 +90,7 @@
<para>Specific phases of the boot process may be referenced via the series of strings measured, separated
by colons (the "boot path"). For example, the boot path for the regular system runtime is
<literal>enter-initrd:leave-initrd:sysinit:ready</literal>, while the one for the initrd is just
- <literal>enter-initrd</literal>. The boot path for the the boot phase before the initrd, is an empty
+ <literal>enter-initrd</literal>. The boot path for the boot phase before the initrd, is an empty
string; because that's hard to pass around a single colon (<literal>:</literal>) may be used
instead. Note that the aforementioned six strings are just the default strings and individual systems
might measure other strings at other times, and thus implement different and more fine-grained boot