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| author | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2020-07-06 10:49:59 +0200 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2020-07-06 11:29:05 +0200 |
| commit | e9dd6984076389e8cfa15b72bc62187544e49b61 (patch) | |
| tree | 677786e0e3b645a848caaaa303597cdc9652d21d /man/systemd.offline-updates.xml | |
| parent | 3da49ad55a2fdf5aecf6ce891200527e7eb432ef (diff) | |
| download | systemd-e9dd6984076389e8cfa15b72bc62187544e49b61.tar.gz | |
tree-wide: fixes for assorted grammar and spelling issues
Fixes #16363. Also includes some changes where I generalized the pattern.
Diffstat (limited to 'man/systemd.offline-updates.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/systemd.offline-updates.xml | 6 |
1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions
diff --git a/man/systemd.offline-updates.xml b/man/systemd.offline-updates.xml index 89c12b598b..81a37f6789 100644 --- a/man/systemd.offline-updates.xml +++ b/man/systemd.offline-updates.xml @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ <orderedlist> <listitem> - <para>The package manager prepares system updates by downloading all (RPM or DEB or + <para>The package manager prepares system updates by downloading all (.rpm or .deb or whatever) packages to update off-line in a special directory <filename index="false">/var/lib/system-update</filename> (or another directory of the package/upgrade manager's choice).</para> @@ -85,8 +85,8 @@ </listitem> <listitem> - <para>The upgrade scripts should exit only after the update is finished. It is expected - that the service which performs the upgrade will cause the machine to reboot after it + <para>The update scripts should exit only after the update is finished. It is expected + that the service which performs the update will cause the machine to reboot after it is done. If the <filename>system-update.target</filename> is successfully reached, i.e. all update services have run, and the <filename>/system-update</filename> symlink still exists, it will be removed and the machine rebooted as a safety measure.</para> |