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| author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2013-09-12 21:12:49 +0200 |
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| committer | Lennart Poettering <lennart@poettering.net> | 2013-09-12 22:09:57 +0200 |
| commit | 79640424059328268b9fb6c5fa8eb777b27a177e (patch) | |
| tree | e3579216d1afd438e667044869dcdf9c732ef18c /man/timedatectl.xml | |
| parent | 982e44dbc3e70c97e83464a30354b80973d52b41 (diff) | |
| download | systemd-79640424059328268b9fb6c5fa8eb777b27a177e.tar.gz | |
man: wording and grammar updates
This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various
issue spotted. I guess I can just skip over reporting ubiquitous
comma placement fixes…
Highligts in this particular commit:
- the "unsigned" type qualifier is completed to form a full type
"unsigned int"
- alphabetic -> lexicographic (that way we automatically define how
numbers get sorted)
Diffstat (limited to 'man/timedatectl.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/timedatectl.xml | 16 |
1 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/man/timedatectl.xml b/man/timedatectl.xml index 9aade29a78..be0ad3f012 100644 --- a/man/timedatectl.xml +++ b/man/timedatectl.xml @@ -122,10 +122,10 @@ <listitem><para>If <command>set-local-rtc</command> is - invoked and this option is passed the + invoked and this option is passed, the system clock is synchronized from the RTC again, taking the new setting into - account. Otherwise the RTC is + account. Otherwise, the RTC is synchronized from the system clock.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ timezones can be listed with <command>list-timezones</command>. If the RTC is configured to be in the - local time this will also update the + local time, this will also update the RTC time. This call will alter the <filename>/etc/localtime</filename> symlink. See @@ -184,17 +184,17 @@ <term><command>set-local-rtc [BOOL]</command></term> <listitem><para>Takes a boolean - argument. If <literal>0</literal> the + argument. If <literal>0</literal>, the system is configured to maintain the - RTC in universal time, if - <literal>1</literal> it will maintain + RTC in universal time. If + <literal>1</literal>, it will maintain the RTC in local time instead. Note that maintaining the RTC in the local timezone is not fully supported and will create various problems with time zone changes and daylight saving - adjustments. If at all possible use - RTC in UTC. Note that invoking this + adjustments. If at all possible, keep the + RTC in UTC mode. Note that invoking this will also synchronize the RTC from the system clock, unless <option>--adjust-system-clock</option> is |